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Debaser Æèòåëü ôîðóìÃ

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 28.03.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 941 Îòêóäà: Cleveland, OH
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Äîáàâëåíî: Âòîðíèê, Íîÿáðÿ 16, 2004 2:45pm Çàãîëîâîê ñîîáùåíèÿ: Re: Î÷åÃèòå ðåçþìå, please! |
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IMHO, Ãà äî óáðà òü âñå "I" èç ðåçþìå, à òà ê æå óáðà òü:
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Gender: Male
Age: 18
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Objective Internship in Hospitality Business where I can contribute my skills and build my experience.
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Objective: To obtain an entry level temporary position in Hospitality Business where I can contribute my skills and build my experience.
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Experience 1. Work on Contract, Winter 1999 – Summer 2004
I was creating custom-built programs for PC and lessons for drummers.
2. Customer Service, Summer 2002
Morozko, Ufa, Russia
Worked as a seller of ice-cream. Operated with the cash register and was closing the store. Voted employee of the month once.
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WORK EXPERIENCE
Software Developer / Software Engeneer/ Programmer (???), ABC Company (??? Òóò ÿ ïðîñòî ÃÃ¥ ïîÃÿë ñ êà êîé êîìïà Ãèåé ó òåáÿ áûë êîÃòðà êò) February 1999 - July 2004
- Developed DDD using V++
- ??? - Ãà äî ÷òî-Ãèáóäü Ãà ïèñà òü ïðî skills related to the hospitality bussiness
Tutor, February 1999 - July 2004
-Did aaa and bbb
-blah-blah-blah
Customer Service representative (?)
Morozko Ltd, Inc, ... (?)
Òà ê, äà ëüøå ñîâñåì ÃåïîÃÿòÃî - customer service rep èëè Sales Dept. representative èëè store clerk? Òóò óæ ÷òî-Ãèáóäü îäÃî Ãà äî âûáðà òü è Ãà ïèñà òü
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Education Higher education
University Name: Ufa State University Of Service (Ufa, Russia)
Type of student: University Undergraduate Student
Major Field of Study: Tourism and Hospitality Business
Graduation date: 1 June 2008
GPA: 5 of 5
High School
School Name: English Gymnasium #39 (Ufa, Russia)
GPA: 4.9 of 5
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EDUCATION
Ufa State University Of Service (Ufa, Russia) (Òû óâåðåà ÷òî èìåÃÃî òà ê ïåðåâîäèòñÿ Ãà çâà Ãèå? ß ÃÃ¥ ïîÃÿë ÷åñòÃî ãîâîðÿ êà êîå Ãà çâà Ãèå ïî-ðóññêè ó òâîåãî óÃèâåðà )
Bachelor of Arts in Tourism and Hospitality Business
Graduation date: June 2008
Current GPA: 5 of 5
High School: English Gymnasium #39 (Ufa, Russia)
GPA: 4.9 of 5
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Honors
The winner of the 5th and the 6th republic scientific conferences in information science and web-design among students – 2001, 2002
The winner of the republic students contest in information science “KRIT-2003�
The winner of the annual philological students conference – 2004
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- WINNER (1st prize? åñëè äà , òî òà ê è Ãà äî Ãà ïèñà òü), 5th and the 6th republic scientific conferences in information science and web-design, 2001, 2002
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Skills
Fluent in English; working knowledge of German, Ukrainian and Bashkir
Have excellent oral, writing and interpersonal communication skills
Honest
Highly organized, punctual
Able to grasp new ideas and integrate them into desired results
Computer experience: Advanced User (MS Windows 95-XP, MacOS, MS Office, HTML and web-design)
Always eager to learn
Activities
Playing drums (Fall 2001 to Present)
Aikido (Summer 2003 to Present)
Swimming (1996-2000)
Judo and Unarmed self-defense (1993-1998)
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- Fluent in English, Russian
- Working knowledge of German and Ukrainian (ÈçâèÃè, Ãî ÃÃ¥ äóìà þ ÷òî êòî-Ãèáóäü çà èÃòåðåñóåòñÿ áà øêèðñêèì, ïðè âñåì óâà æåÃèè)
- Excellent oral, writing and interpersonal communication skills
- Able to grasp new ideas and integrate them into desired results (Õîðîøî áû ÷òîáû Ãà ìåê Ãà ýòî áûë â WORK EXPERIENCE)
Activities - ÃÃ¥ çÃà þ, ìîæåò è Ãà äî èõ ïèñà òü äëÿ ðåçþìå Ãà òà êóþ ðà áîòó, Andrew ëó÷øå çÃà åò _________________

Ïîñëåäíèé ðàç ðåäàêòèðîâàëîñü: Debaser (Âòîðíèê, Íîÿáðÿ 16, 2004 4:32pm), âñåãî ðåäàêòèðîâàëîñü 1 ðàç |
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Andrew Ãëà âÃûé òðåïà ÷

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 01.03.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 10421 Îòêóäà: Èðêóòñê, RU -> Los Angeles, US
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Äîáàâëåíî: Âòîðíèê, Íîÿáðÿ 16, 2004 3:46pm Çàãîëîâîê ñîîáùåíèÿ: Re: Î÷åÃèòå ðåçþìå, please! |
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Âîîáùå, äóìà þ Activities ÃÃ¥ ÃóæÃî. ÊîÃå÷Ãî, ðà áîòîäà òåëü ìîæåò ïîñìîòðåòü êà êîé òû âñåñòîðîÃÃÃ¥ ðà çâèòûé, Ãî îÃè æå housekeeper’à èùóò... Âîò åñëè èñêà òü ðà áîòó Lifeguard’à – òà ì äà , ìîæÃî óêà çà òü ÷òî ñïîðòèâÃûå ñåêöèè ïîñåùà åøü è ò.ä. Âñå IMHO.
Debaser õîðîøèå çà ìå÷à Ãèÿ ñäåëà ë!  _________________ ÀÃäðåé Ãåðà ñèìîâ  |
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Debaser Æèòåëü ôîðóìÃ

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 28.03.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 941 Îòêóäà: Cleveland, OH
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Äîáàâëåíî: Âòîðíèê, Íîÿáðÿ 16, 2004 4:22pm Çàãîëîâîê ñîîáùåíèÿ: Re: Î÷åÃèòå ðåçþìå, please! |
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Cover letter...
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Ã�óäó âà ì î÷åÃü áëà ãîäà ðåà çà ëþáóþ ïîìîùü! ÎãðîìÃîå ñïà ñèáî! |
ÃŒÃÃ¥ êà æåòñÿ, ÷òî ãëîáà ëüÃî îðãà Ãèçà öèÿ ïèñüìà ÃÃ¥ ñîâñåì ïðà âèëüÃà ÿ. Õîðîøî áû òà ê:
- ß Âà ñÿ Ã�óïêèà è ÿ ó÷óñü êà ê ðà ç òà ì ãäå âà ì Ãà äî
- Âîçüìèòå ìåÃÿ ê ñåáå Ãà òà êóþ-òî ïîçèöèü èáî âû êðóòû, È
- ß òîæå êðóò: blah blah blah, è Ãà ì âìåñòå áóäåò çà å... çà øèáèñü
- I will be able to start my employment at XXX_Company on June 1, 2005 and expect to terminate it no later than October XX, 2005 (1 ïðåäëîæåÃèå !)
- I am fully authorized to work in the US (1 ïðåäëîæåÃèå !)
- Resume is enclosed
Ã�Ã¥ Ãà äî ãðóçèòü ðà áîòîäà òåëÿ çà ðà Ãåå ñâîèìè ïðîáëåìà ìè ïî ïîâîäó òîãî êà ê è êîãäà âû áóäåòå ïîëó÷à òü Social Security, Drivers License è áèëåòû â öèðê. Ã�îäðà çóìåâà åòñÿ ÷òî âñå ýòî ó òåáÿ áóäåò è òà ê. Ã�èêòî ÃÃ¥ ëþáèò ÷èòà òü äëèÃÃûå ïèñüìà .
Âîò ýòî âñå Ãà ôèã:
sponsored by the Council on International Exchange (Council Exchanges). I will possess all the necessary legal working documents for employment in the United States from the 1st June up to the 1st October. I will apply for a Social Security Card once I arrive in the U.S.. I should know my exact date of arrival once my visa and paperwork have been processed.
Ã�à ÷à òü êà ê-Ãèäü òà ê:
Dear Mr. ÕÕÕ:
My name is XXX YYY, I am a sophomore student at QQQ University, majoðring in Tourism and Hospitality Business. I would like to apply for a temporary position of ??? at XXX_Company. My experience in (ÊîÃêðåòÃî êà êîé) ... òî åñòü ÿ êðóò. Òóò æå ìîæÃî ïðî ñêèëëñ.
Ó ìåÃÿ ñëîæèëîñü òà êîå âïå÷à òëåÃèå ÷òî òû äåðæèøü à äðåñà òà ýòîãî ïèñüìà çà êëèÃè÷åñêîãî èäèîòà . Ã�îïðîáóé ïåðåâåñòè ïèñüìî Ãà ðóññêèé è ïðî÷èòà òü åãî ñà ì òà ê, êà ê áóäòî áû îÃî áûëî à äðåñîâà Ãî òåáå.
As you will notice on my resume, I study in...
Ã�ó òî åñòü ñ êîÃòåêñòîì - èäè ðåçþìå ÷èòà é, òà ì Ãà ïèñà Ãî. Ã�Ã¥ Ãà äî òà ê áóäóùèì ðà áîòîäà òåëåì êîìà Ãäîâà òü
Working in customer service as a seller of ice-cream I have à proven capacity to approach problems creatively and effectively, and work well both independently and in a team environment.
Òåáå ñà ìîìó ÃÃ¥ ñìåøÃî? Ãó êà êîé òâîð÷åñêèé ïîäõîä â ïðîäà æå ïëîìáèðà ? êà êèå ïðîáëåìû? Êà êà ÿ ðà áîòà â team environment? ÿ òåáå äà þ 10 ðóáëåé, òû ìÃÃ¥ - ìîðîæåÃîå, end of story. Ã�à ñêîëüêî ÿ ïîÃÿë òû ïðîñòî ïåðåäðà ë ýòîò êóñîê ñ îáðà çöà . Åñëè ÿ ýòî ïîÃÿë, òî ýòî åùå áûñòðåå ïîéìåò è ðà áîòîäà òåëü. Îïÿòü æå îïðåäåëèñü - èëè customer service èëè ïðîäà âåö. Ã�ó è à Ããëèéñêèé ïîïðà âèòü Ãà äî áóäåò çà Ãîâî êîãäà ïåðåïèøåøü.
Äà , è âñå ôðà çû - ÿ êðóò â òîì è â òîì ÃóæÃî ïîäêðåïèòü êðà òêèìè, Ãî ÊÎÃ�ÊÒÃ�Ã…Ã’Ã�ÛÌÈ ïðèìåðà ìè, èÃà ÷å - ÃåóáåäèòåëüÃî. _________________
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Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 04.11.2004 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 12 Îòêóäà: Ufa
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Ïîñëåäíèé ðàç ðåäàêòèðîâàëîñü: Estranged (Ïîíåäåëüíèê, Èþëÿ 7, 2008 4:09pm), âñåãî ðåäàêòèðîâàëîñü 1 ðàç |
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Andrew Ãëà âÃûé òðåïà ÷

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 01.03.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 10421 Îòêóäà: Èðêóòñê, RU -> Los Angeles, US
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Äîáàâëåíî: Âòîðíèê, Íîÿáðÿ 16, 2004 10:51pm Çàãîëîâîê ñîîáùåíèÿ: Re: Î÷åÃèòå ðåçþìå, please! |
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Âîò ýòî âñå Ãà ôèã:
sponsored by the Council on International Exchange (Council Exchanges). I will possess all the necessary legal working documents for employment in the United States from the 1st June up to the 1st October. I will apply for a Social Security Card once I arrive in the U.S.. I should know my exact date of arrival once my visa and paperwork have been processed. |
ÑïîÃñîð ñà ì ðåêîìåÃäóåò èìåòü ýòó èÃôîðìà öèþ â cover latter. Õîòÿ ñîãëà ñåà – ëèøÃåãî ÃÃ¥ ÃóæÃî. Ê òîìó æå, òå îðãà Ãèçà öèè, êòî ðà áîòà þò ñ J1-ñòóäåÃòà ìè è áåç ýòîãî çÃà þò âñå ëó÷øå ó÷à ñòÃèêîâ. Ã�î îïÿòü æå, ìîæÃî âñòðåòèòü è òà êîãî ðà áîòîäà òåëÿ, êîòîðîãî ìîæåò îòïóãÃóòü èÃôà î òîì, ÷òî ÷åëîâåê èç Ã�îññèè èùåò ðà áîòó, à òà ê çà éäåò Ãà ñà éò Council Exchange è âñå óçÃà åò ïðî ñòóäåÃ÷åñêèé îáìåÃ. _________________ ÀÃäðåé Ãåðà ñèìîâ  |
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Debaser Æèòåëü ôîðóìÃ

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 28.03.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 941 Îòêóäà: Cleveland, OH
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Äîáàâëåíî: Ñðåäà, Íîÿáðÿ 17, 2004 12:04am Çàãîëîâîê ñîîáùåíèÿ: Re: Î÷åÃèòå ðåçþìå, please! |
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| Ã�î îïÿòü æå, ìîæÃî âñòðåòèòü è òà êîãî ðà áîòîäà òåëÿ, êîòîðîãî ìîæåò îòïóãÃóòü èÃôà î òîì, ÷òî ÷åëîâåê èç Ã�îññèè èùåò ðà áîòó, à òà ê çà éäåò Ãà ñà éò Council Exchange è âñå óçÃà åò ïðî ñòóäåÃ÷åñêèé îáìåÃ. |
Ñêà æó ïî ñåêðåòó, Ãè Ãà êà êîé ñà éò òà êîé ðà áîòîäà òåëü çà õîäèòü ÃÃ¥ áóäåò, Ãà ôèã åìó ýòî ÃÃ¥ Ãà äî. Ã�îðìà ëüÃîãî ðà áîòîäà òåëÿ âîëÃóåò îäÃî - áóäåò ëè Ãà Ãÿòûé ðà áîòÃèê ðà áîòà òü çà òà êèå ñìåøÃûå äåÃüãè è áóäåò ëè ýòî çà êîÃÃî. Âñå îñòà ëüÃîå åãî ïðîñòî ÃÃ¥ èÃòåðåñóåò. _________________
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Debaser Æèòåëü ôîðóìÃ

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 28.03.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 941 Îòêóäà: Cleveland, OH
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Debaser, îãðîìÃîå ñïà ñèáî!
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Education Higher education
University Name: Ufa State University of Service (Ufa, Russia)
Diploma: Bachelor of Arts in Tourism and Hospitality Business
Graduation date: June 2008
Current GPA: 5 of 5
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Ñëîâà Higher education, University Name, Diploma - ëèøÃèå. Ê òîìó æå bachelor - ýòî ÃÃ¥ diploma, a degree, òî áèøü ñòåïåÃü
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1) Ã�è â îäÃîì ðåçþìå Ãà çà ïà äÃûõ ñà éòà õ ÿ ÃÃ¥ âèäåë óêà çà ÃÃîãî à äðåñà ìåñòà ðà áîòû.
2) À óÃèâåð ìîé - Óôèìñêèé Ãîñ. ÓÃèâåðñèòåò Ñåðâèñà (çà âòðà òî÷Ãî óçÃà þ, Ãî âñåãäà òà ê ïèñà ë ...)
3) Activities, ïóñòü Ãà âñÿèé áóäóò, ÃÃ¥ çà õî÷åò ÷èòà òü - ÃÃ¥ áóäåò, îÃè â ñà ìîì êîÃöå
4) êà ê ïðà âèëüÃî Ãà ïèñà òü òî, êåì áóäó ïîñëå îêîÃֈ Ãèÿ óÃèâåðà ? Diploma: Bachelor...?
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1) �ó äà , à â ÷åì ïðîáëåìà ?
2) Ñòðà ÃÃîå Ãà çâà Ãèå... Ã�ó òîãäà Ufa State University of Service äåéñòâèòåëüÃî
3) ÎÊ
4) �ðîñòî Bachelor of Arts in Tourism and Hospitality Business
ß áû ÃåìÃîãî ðåîðãà Ãèçîâà ë ïèñüìî. Oïÿòü æå òû ïîñëà ë ðà áîòîäà òåëÿ â êîÃöå ïèñüìà ðåçþìå ÷èòà òü, ÿ òà ì ñèÃèì èçìåÃèë. Åùå ÿ áû ñîêðà òèë âòîðîé à áçà ö ïðî ìîðîæåÃîå, à â òà êîì äóõå Ãà ïèñà ë áû 1-ûé à áçà ö ïðî îòåëü.
Îïÿòü æå Ãåñêîëüêî Ãà ãëî ñïðà øèâà òü ïðî accomodation, âðîäå òåáÿ ÃÃ¥ âçÿëè åùå, Ãî ýòî êà ê ðà ç ìîæåò è ÎÊ, òóò ÃÃ¥ óâåðåÃ
Êîðî÷å, ãäå-òî òà ê:
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My name is Knyazev Kirill, I am a sophomore student at Ufa State University of Service, majoðring in Tourism and Hospitality Business. I would like to apply for a temporary position of housekeeper at Accor Company. I have previous experience working in a hotel for two summers. My responsibilities included guest rooms cleaning, rooms inspection and reporting to the hotel front desk on their condition.
Working as a shop assistant during summer 2002 I have proven capacity to approach problems creatively and effectively, and work well both independently and in a team environment. There was a variety of new ice-cream cakes in the shop which were not popular among customers, so I proposed a "buy two boxes of ice-cream - get a free cake" offer. After a week, ice-cream cakes sales increased by more then 120%, and overall sales doubled. That month I was chosen an employee of the month.
By working in different areas I have developed oral, writing and interpersonal communication skills. I am highly organized and honest person and always eager to learn.
I would greatly appreciate if you provide me with some additional informational materials regarding employment opportunities at Accor Hotel, including an application form if necessary. Also, I would appreciate any information regarding my accommodation in or around the hotel during my possible employmet.
I will be able to start my employment at Accor Hotel on June 1, 2005 and expect to terminate it no later than October 1, 2005. I am fully authorized to work in the US.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I would be happy to discuss my employment opportunity at XXX hotel by e-mail xxx@hotmail.com or phone 7-(123)-123-4567
Sincerely,
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Ïîñëåäíèé ðàç ðåäàêòèðîâàëîñü: Debaser (Ñðåäà, Íîÿáðÿ 17, 2004 12:50am), âñåãî ðåäàêòèðîâàëîñü 1 ðàç |
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Debaser Æèòåëü ôîðóìÃ

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 äîãîÃêó.  ðà çäåëå awards ïåðâûì äåëîì ÃóæÃî ïèñà òü ïðî employee of the month, à ÃÃ¥ ïðî ïðîãðà ìèñòñêèå êîÃêóðñû, IMHO. _________________
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Andrew Ãëà âÃûé òðåïà ÷

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 01.03.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 10421 Îòêóäà: Èðêóòñê, RU -> Los Angeles, US
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Äîáàâëåíî: Ñðåäà, Íîÿáðÿ 17, 2004 8:08am Çàãîëîâîê ñîîáùåíèÿ: Re: Î÷åÃèòå ðåçþìå, please! |
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| Ñêà æó ïî ñåêðåòó, Ãè Ãà êà êîé ñà éò òà êîé ðà áîòîäà òåëü çà õîäèòü ÃÃ¥ áóäåò, Ãà ôèã åìó ýòî ÃÃ¥ Ãà äî. Ã�îðìà ëüÃîãî ðà áîòîäà òåëÿ âîëÃóåò îäÃî - áóäåò ëè Ãà Ãÿòûé ðà áîòÃèê ðà áîòà òü çà òà êèå ñìåøÃûå äåÃüãè è áóäåò ëè ýòî çà êîÃÃî. Âñå îñòà ëüÃîå åãî ïðîñòî ÃÃ¥ èÃòåðåñóåò. |
 ïðèÃöèïå äà , òû ïðà â. _________________ ÀÃäðåé Ãåðà ñèìîâ  |
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Estranged �îâè÷îê
Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 04.11.2004 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 12 Îòêóäà: Ufa
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Ïîñëåäíèé ðàç ðåäàêòèðîâàëîñü: Estranged (Ïîíåäåëüíèê, Èþëÿ 7, 2008 4:10pm), âñåãî ðåäàêòèðîâàëîñü 1 ðàç |
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Andrew Ãëà âÃûé òðåïà ÷

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 01.03.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 10421 Îòêóäà: Èðêóòñê, RU -> Los Angeles, US
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Äîáàâëåíî: Âòîðíèê, Íîÿáðÿ 30, 2004 8:17am Çàãîëîâîê ñîîáùåíèÿ: |
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Ã�ðîãðåññ Ãà ëèöî
Åñëè âñå-òà êè óâåðåÃ, ÷òî ÃóæÃî óêà çûâà òü “Tutorâ€� – ïóñòü áóäåò. Ëè÷Ãî ÿ áû ÃÃ¥ ñòà ë, Ãà âåðÃîå.
 ֏ ñ ïîèñêîì ðà áîòû! _________________ ÀÃäðåé Ãåðà ñèìîâ  |
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Debaser Æèòåëü ôîðóìÃ

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 28.03.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 941 Îòêóäà: Cleveland, OH
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Äîáàâëåíî: Âòîðíèê, Íîÿáðÿ 30, 2004 1:21pm Çàãîëîâîê ñîîáùåíèÿ: |
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Helen_NJ Æèòåëü ôîðóìÃ

Çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí: 13.11.2003 Ñîîáùåíèÿ: 1539 Îòêóäà: NC, USA
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Äîáàâëåíî: Ñðåäà, Äåêàáðÿ 1, 2004 3:10am Çàãîëîâîê ñîîáùåíèÿ: |
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Estranged, ïîãîäü åùå, ÃÃ¥ îòïðà âëÿé ðåçþìå ñ ïèñüìîì. Ñì. Ãèæå ìîþ ïðà âêó ïðÿìî â òåêñòå. Èñïðà âëåÃÃîå âûäåëåÃî êóðñèâîì, à âûäåëåÃÃîå êðà ñÃûì ÃóæÃî óäà ëèòü. ÊîììåÃòà ðèè è ðà çúÿñÃÃ¥Ãèÿ ñëåäóþò çà öèòà òîé.
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KNYAZEV KIRILL
Address: 13G-21 Sophie Perovskoi Street
Ufa, Bashkortostan, Russia 450103
Phone: 7 3472-545-119
Mobile: 89174008069
E-mail: knkirill@hotmail.com
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Objective
A temporary entry-level position in Hospitality Industry in which my experience and training can be utilized to our mutual benefit.
Experience 1. Tutor, April 2002 – October 2004
Taught students to play drums.
2. Housekeeper
June-August 2003
June-August 2004
Hotel Tourist, Ufa, Russia
Cleaned the hotel guest rooms
Inspected rooms and suites, reported to the hotel front desk which suites were clean.
3. Shop assistant, June – August 2002
Morozko Shop, Ufa, Russia
Responsible for the ice cream sales in a specialty store.
Education Higher education
Currently attending Ufa State University of Service (Ufa, Russia)
Majoring in Tourism and Hospitality Business
Estimated graduation date: June 2008
Current GPA: 5 of 5
High School Diploma
English Gymnasia #39 (Ufa, Russia) çäåñü Ãà äî ãîä îêîÃֈ Ãèÿ øêîëû!
GPA: 4.9 of 5
Awards
Employee of the month, Morozko Shop, August 2002
Winner, 5th and the 6th republic scientific conferences in information science and web-design, 2001, 2002
Winner, republic students contest in information science “KRIT-2003�
Winner, annual philological students conference, 2004
Skills
Fluent in English, Russian
Considerable knowledge of German and Ukrainian
Excellent oral, writing and interpersonal communication skills
Highly organized
Able to grasp new ideas and integrate them into desired results
Computer experience: Advanced User (MS Windows 95-XP, MS Office, HTML and web design)
Activities Playing drums (Fall 2001 to Present)
Aikido (Summer 2003 to Present)
Swimming (1996-2000)
Judo and Unarmed self-defense (1993-1998)
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KNYAZEV KIRILL
13G-21 Sophie Perovskoi Street
Ufa, Bashkortostan, Russia 450103
(3472) 545-119
knkirill@hotmail.com
November 17, 2004
READER’S NAME
Reader's Title
Name of Company
Company Address
Dear Mr. READER’S NAME :
As a sophomore student at Ufa State University of Service, majoring in Tourism and Hospitality Business, I will participate in the “Work and Travel USA� program sponsored by the International Exchange Council. I would like to apply for a temporary position as a housekeeper at Accor Company. I have 6 months of experience working as a housekeeper in the Tourist hotel in Russia. My responsibilities included guest rooms cleaning, rooms inspection and reporting to the hotel front desk on their condition.
Working as a Shop Assistant during summer 2002, I have proven capacity to approach problems creatively and effectively, and to work well both independently and in a team environment. There was a variety of new ice cream cakes in the shop, which were not popular among customers, so I proposed a "buy two boxes of ice cream - get a free cake" offer. After just a week, ice cream cakes sales increased by more than 120%, and overall in-store sales doubled. As a result, I was named Employee of the Month.
By working in different areas I have developed oral, writing and interpersonal communication skills. I am highly organized and honest person and always eager to learn.
I will be able to start my employment with your company on June 1, 2005 and expect to terminate it no later than October 1, 2005. I am fully authorized to work in the US.
I would greatly appreciate if you could provide me with some additional information regarding employment opportunities at Accor Hotel, including an application form, if necessary. Also, I would appreciate any information regarding accommodations in or around the hotel during my possible employment.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I will be happy to discuss my employment opportunity at Accor hotel by e-mail knkirill@hotmail.com or by phone 7-(3472)-545-119.
Sincerely,
Kirill Knyazev
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ÊîììåÃòà ðèè ê ïðà âêå:
1. Ôîðìà ò à äðåñà â ÑØÀ: äîì, Ãà çâà Ãèå óëèöû, Ãîìåð êâà ðòèðû
2. Ã�åà êêóðà òÃîñòü - ýòî î÷åÃü áîëüøà ÿ îøèáêà , êîòîðóþ äîïóñêà þò ìÃîãèå à âòîðû ðåçþìå. Ã�à ïðèìåð, ó âà ñ â îäÃîì Ãîìåðå òåëåôîÃà ñòîÿò ÷åðòî÷êè, à â äðóãîì Ãåò, ïîòîì äà òà Ãà ïèñà Ãà "2003 & 2004" è ò.ä. Êà çà ëîñü áû ìåëî÷ü, Ãî òîìó, êòî ÷èòà åò ðåçþìå, ýòî ñðà çó ãîâîðèò î âà øåì "attention to details" (or lack thereof). Ã�åçþìå äîëæÃî áûòü âûëèçà Ãî äî çà ïÿòîé - à äðåñà , äà òû âñå â îäÃîì ôîðìà òå, âåçäå îäèà ñòèëü è ò.ï.
3. Âîçðà ñò è ïîë â ÑØÀ ÃÃ¥ ïðèÃÿòî óêà çûâà òü â ðåçþìå (õîòÿ ýòî Ãîðìà ëüÃî, Ãà ïðèìåð, â Ãåðìà Ãèè). Òóò âñå î÷åÃü ÷óâñòâèòåëüÃû ê âîïðîñà ì ëþáîé äèñêðèìèÃà öèè è âà øå ðåçþìå äîëæÃû îöåÃèâà òü Ãà îñÃîâå Ãà âûêîâ è îïûòà , à ÃÃ¥ ïîëà è âîçðà ñòà . Åñëè õîòèòå, âîçðà ñò ìîæÃî óïîìÿÃóòü â cover letter, õîòÿ ïðèìåðÃûé âîçðà ñò ðà áîòîäà òåëü ìîæåò óãà äà òü ïî äà òà ì îêîÃֈ Ãèÿ øêîëû/óÃèâåðñèòåòà . Ã�òî âû, êñòà òè, çà áûëè óêà çà òü.
4. Îáðà çîâà Ãèå ïèøåòñÿ â ôîðìà òå: ïîëó÷åÃÃà ÿ ñòåïåÃü (äèïëîì èëè à òòåñòà ò), Ãà çâà Ãèå ó÷åáÃîãî ó÷ðåæäåÃèÿ, ãîä. Ã’.ê. âû åùå ó÷èòåñü, âû ÃÃ¥ ìîæåòå óêà çûâà òü Bachelor, ïðîñòî óêà æèòå "major". Äà , Gymnasium (AKA Gym) - ýòî ñïîðòçà ë, ãèìÃà çèÿ - ýòî Gymnasia, ÃÃ¥ ïóòà éòå.
5. Èç âà øåãî ðåçþìå áûëî ÃÃ¥ î÷åÃü ïîÃÿòÃî, ÷òî âû åùå ó÷èòåñü è èùåòå ðà áîòó òîëüêî Ãà ëåòî. Ã�îýòîìó ÿ èçìåÃèëà Objective è Ãà ÷à ëî cover letter.
6. Âû î÷åÃü ìà ëî ðà ññêà çûâà åòå î òîì, ÷òî äåëà ëè Ãà ðà áîòå, Ãà äî áû äîáà âèòü. ×åñòÃî ãîâîðÿ, ÿ ÃÃ¥ çÃà þ, çà ÷åì âîîáùå óïîìèÃà òü "tutor" - âûãëÿäèò áóäòî âû Ãåñêîëüêî ëåò, êà ê çà é÷èê-ýÃåðäæà éçåð, Ãà áà ðà áà ÃÃ¥ ñòó÷à ëè.
7. Shop assistant ìîæåò áûòü ÃÃ¥ î÷åÃü ïðà âèëüÃûì ïåðåâîäîì. Êà ê ïî-ðóññêè-òî áûëî?
8. ß ÃåìÃîãî ÃÃ¥ ïîÃÿëà , êà ê ìîæÃî áûòü "winner" Ãà êîÃôåðåÃöèè. Äóìà þ ðà áîòîäà òåëè òîæå ÃÃ¥ ïîéìóò. Ã�à ïèøèòå ëó÷øå "Award winner of the 5th and the 6th Republic Scientific Conference in Information Science" èëè ÷òî-òî â ýòîì ðîäå (Ãà çâà Ãèÿ Ãà äî ñ áîëüøîé áóêâû Ãà ÷èÃà òü, êñòà òè).
9. Åñëè âû ÃÃ¥ çÃà åòå èìåÃè ïîëó÷à òåëÿ, ïèñüìî Ãà äî Ãà ÷èÃà òü "Dear Sir or Madam". Ã�Ã¥ çà áûâà éòå èñïðà âëÿòü Ãà Ms, åñëè îáðà ùà åòåñü ê æåÃùèÃÃ¥.
10. Ã�Ã¥ Ãà ÷èÃà éòå ïèñüìî ñ "My name is...". Âî-ïåðâûõ, ýòî ÃÃ¥ øêîëüÃûé òîïèê, âî-âòîðûõ, âà øå èìÿ óæå óêà çà Ãî âûøå. Åñëè ïèøåòå ñâîå èìÿ, òî ñÃà ÷à ëà ïèøèòå èìÿ, à ïîòîì ôà ìèëèþ (Ãåäà ðîì â ÑØÀ ãîâîðÿò "first name", "last name"!)
11. Ice cream ïèøåòñÿ ðà çäåëüÃî, à entry-level ÷åðåç äåôèñ.
12. "cakes sales" (è åùå ìÃîãî à Ãà ëîãè÷Ãûõ) - î÷åÃü ðà ñïðîñòðà ÃÃ¥ÃÃà ÿ îøèáêà ñðåäè ðóññêîÿçû÷Ãûõ. Ã�ðà âèëüÃî "cake sales" èëè "sales of the cakes". Åñëè Ãà äî ðà çúÿñÃÃ¥Ãèå - ýòî â äðóãóþ òåìó.
Åñëè ÷òî-òî ïðîïóñòèëà - ñîððè. |
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